Thank you, brother. It’s true. Commas are a weakness of mine. I did take the time to edit the book a bit better than these articles here. However, I don’t write for business. I’m just an uneducated, broken soldier who loves the word and writes for pleasure and therapy.

Cheers again for the critique. If you like the writing but hate my grammar, perhaps I could take you on as my editor?

‘To write is good, to edit is divine.’

Take care,

Warren